Wharton University of Pennsylvania

CANDIDATE:  HM, India

QUALIFICATION: Bachelor of Technology in Aerospace Engineering from IIT Bombay

PRE-MBA INDUSTRY:  Private investment

EXPERIENCE: 3 years

GPA: 8.9/10 (Among the top 10 percent in class)

GRE/GMAT:  333 (GRE)

ADMITTED TO: Wharton 

How a Values-Driven Candidate Earned Admission to Wharton

Background

HM’s MBA journey is rooted in empathy and equity. In college, she helped a protégé at risk of dropping out during the COVID-19 pandemic by co-creating a $200,000 tech-aid scholarship and counselling platform, which reduced dropout rates by 40 percent. She also advocated for a mandatory gender sensitisation course on a campus with only 10 percent women, embedding inclusion into the curriculum. Beyond campus, she spent three years as a pro bono consultant, leading financial literacy workshops that helped women entrepreneurs scale sustainably. At work, she revived a struggling private investment portfolio company by aligning teams, refining priorities, and launching their mobile app to restore momentum and operational clarity. However, she wanted to pursue an MBA to fulfill her goal of combining capital and inclusion in building India’s deep-tech ecosystem.

Approach

At The Red Pen, we collaborated with HM to craft a focused, purpose-driven narrative that strikes a balance between personal conviction and professional depth. We helped her connect her work in education, gender equity and early-stage investing through a unifying theme of empowerment. We also recommended targeted conversations with Wharton students and alumni, which helped her identify specific clubs, courses and initiatives aligned with her goals. These insights strengthened her school fit, while we guided her to integrate her operational expertise, investment experience and passion for dance into a cohesive and authentic application.

Key Takeaway

HM’s acceptance at Wharton shows that authenticity and purpose are essential in MBA admissions. Her journey highlights that leadership is not only about results, but about empowering others. By aligning her values with real-world impact, she built a credible, deeply personal application, proving that the most compelling candidates lead with empathy, reflect with intention, and drive inclusive change.

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